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Post by Omega Red on Jan 31, 2011 23:31:18 GMT -5
Like Brand, I would like some feedback for my Omega Red stuff. I would gladly return the favor ;D
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Post by Captain America on Feb 4, 2011 8:25:34 GMT -5
Just read your first piece, and overall, I liked it. Only problem I had with it is that it seemed to continuously switch back and forth between present and past-tense.
Content was fine, and gave a small look into Red's motivations and outlook. I look forward to more.
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